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Tuesday, 17 September 2019
My Speech
This is my speech for 2019.
It was on fortnite and different games and learn't some facts about fortnite.
What was you favourite part.
Hello Ihaks! I loved the fact that you did something very original! I also liked all the pictures but I couldn't hear you! For next time maybe talk with a more clear voice or go in a quiter space? Thanks Jemma.
Hello ihaka I like it how you have done your speech on something that looks like you know about next time maybe record it in a quite room Thanks Tristan
Hi Ihaka My name is Jacob from Paroa school.I like your speech about fortnite. You had good structure but next time maybe go some where quiet so then I can hear you better.
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Hello Ihaks!
ReplyDeleteI loved the fact that you did something very original!
I also liked all the pictures but I couldn't hear you!
For next time maybe talk with a more clear voice or go in a quiter space?
Thanks Jemma.
Hello ihaka
ReplyDeleteI like it how you have done your speech on something that looks like you know about next time maybe record it in a quite room
Thanks Tristan
Hi Ihaka My name is Jacob from Paroa school.I like your speech about fortnite. You had good structure but next time maybe go some where quiet so then I can hear you better.
ReplyDelete