Max loved riding his quad bike on the track. His was fuming because he keeps falling off the quad bike. His grandma was baking some chocolate chip cookies for a desert for doing a trick. He did a backflip it was cool. Max did a big jump and jumped over 2 ramps. His grandma was surprised. Him and his grandma enjoyed eating the cookies because they were so nice.Max's motorbike mumbled after a drop. Suddenly sally sat on the cookies.(Sally Grandma) She was devastated because she sat on the cookies they were enjoying. Grandma got very sad. Max got very angry and told his grandma to go bake so more cookies while he drives his quad around. But the cookies took until midnight because she forgot about the cookies. She was angry.
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